Some people prefer to live in countryside and some in city considering their children. However, I prefer to live in city (why not change a word, maybe urban area) because I come from countryside and know how difficult it is to grow up there as a student with big goals in life.
Cities are better to stay for children because the exposure one gets in cities cannot be compared with living in countryside. Everyone wants their children to study in good schools, colleges but this dream is difficult to get fulfilled while staying in countryside when taking example of country like India. For instense, In India all good schools and colleges are in metro cities. Therefore, for education purpose cities are better. I would like to quote my own example i.e. (better not use it, change into such as may be better) in order to study from good college I studied in boarding school and college because there was no good law school in my town.
Moreover, the life in cities is better in comparison to countryside when comes to facilities like medical facilities, market, etc. Also, in cities children can learn other things also apart from studies like dance, music, etc and pursue their hobbies as in cities you can easily find coach, institutes for learning these activities. Additionally, life in city is more hectic and tough due to competition, people coming from different places, etc so it is easy to get acquainted with this life at young age. (etc, is overused)
Further, people want to work in city if they are in professional job or business as a result it is better to stay there. In addition employment rate is far higher in city than country side; therefore, to avoid migration to city in later life, it is better to settle when children are growing up.
To summarize the above points I would like to say living in cities is better than countryside when you are looking for overall development of your kids and wants better and secured future.
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