I saw great improvements in this essay with very few grammatical and spelling mistakes (only one spelling mistake in your essay). In addition, your structure is easy to understand with the many good examples and vocabulary. Keep up the good work!
However, I still want to give you some negative comments to improve your writing.
+ Maybe it should be better to change some of your sentences from passive to active to imrprove the clarity. However, I'm not quite sure so I did not make changes in your essay.
+ The word "pass away" and "thus" might not suitable in academic writing.
All the best.
"Along with life of human is always observation and learning (Human life is a period of learning and observation). Some (some people) claim that people should use (each individual should only use) a certain period of their life to study while other (others) believe we need to learn all the time. I personally agree with the latter view because education cultivate our knowledge acquisition and create meningful (meaningful ) moments in life"
"There are some reasons for thinking that education is not a lifelong task. First, wonderful moments of childhood can be deprived if children are taught a great amount of knowledge. In stead (instead ) of interacting with their peers, children have to learn many subjects which take almost their time. Secondly, after students finish their universities, career and family are prioritized first, rather than studying. Thirdly, the journey of learning should stop in our twilight years. During the rest years of life, it is time for human to take a rest instead of burdening their minds with knowledge."
" On the other hand, (it is also understandable that ) education plays a crucial role at any age ( in all ages ). To begin with, children can discover their talents at the early age if they receive suitable guidance. Thus (Therefore), classes for infant priodigies (prodigies) are operated with the purpose of revealing and encouraging their talents. In addition, no sooner people go to work than they recognize that what they know is just a drop of the ocean. That is the reason why most big companies in the world annually spend a huge amount of money on training sessions for their employees. This help (helps ) their staffs to keep-up (keep up) with cutting-edge technologies and working changes. Furthermore, by the time people stop learning, the sense of boredom and uselessness creeps in. Steve Jobs (,) who studied and researched to (until ) the last minute, felt no pain of his passing away (dealth). People only feel the true meaning of life when they are learning and doing something new."
"To summarize, although people need to have leisure time, they definitely have to enhance their knowledge to adapt with restless changes in the world. It is education that partly makes the life of us meaningful (our lives more meaningful )".