Every year a lot of money is spent on space projects. Many people, on the contrary, claim that it is worth running such programs! This essay will show my point of view that there are two reasons to budget that exploration.
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Every year huge money is spent on space projects. Although some people opposite to this investment, many people claim that it is worthwhile running such programmes. I think there are two reasons why we should budget for that exploration.
The space change can affects our planet directly. Imagine what will happen when the earth moves too close to or too far away from the sun. Our earth's temperature would change dramatically causing the survival rate of many species to drop. The project would let us learn about various potential threats and space programs could give us the resources to solve them.
I do not think if the earth is going to go closer toward the sun astronomers or space exploration can do any thing!!!
I think we need to back up our opinion with compelling reasons. Like global warming, lack of resources, need a place for over population and so forth.
If our earth's temperature dramatically changes , it may cause a drop in the survival of the species.
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In the second paragraph add at least one sentence after you give reason for space exploration. For example,
Moreover, since resources on our earth are limited and with the dramatically increasing demand, we need sources from elsewhere. For example, as some resources such as oil is rare on the our planet, might abound on other planets.