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Should sports classes be dropped in secondary school so students can concentrate on academic subjects?

          Its seems an issue rise about physical education should be dropped, so that students can concentrate with their subjects. Some students and parents are in favor with it and let their children focus their academic subjects. I will stressed out some positive and negative points of having a sports classes.

          First of all, sports classes has a positive effect on students. When a student engaged in sports activities, he/she can learn competitiveness, which it can be apply in his/her academics and much later on with his/her work. In addition on that, in sports activities students learn cooperation and team building, which a vital attitude at work place. More over, leadership will be enhance when a student assigned as a team captain, who will lead his/her team mate into a victorious path.

         In contrast, academic subjects plays a major role in their course.Mostly, students focus on academic subjects compared to sports classes. Futhermore, sports classes involve physical workout which drain the student's energy, with less energy students lost focus or concentration to their academic subjects therefore might lead to a failure grades.

        In conculsion, we all knew that academic subjects mold student's into his/her career.However leadership, cooperation and competitiveness has a vital role in one's profession. Those attitudes are mostly enhance in engaging sports activities. So I think sports classes should be remain. To compensate the time between academic subjects and sports classes, sports classes should be schedule on a day near weekends.Also sports classes should not be scheduled between academic subjects to avoid using to much energy in sports activities and have more energy on academic subjects. More over, parents should encourage their children to engaged sports activities to become physical fit and enhance the characteristics of being a leader, cooperative and competative.