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The charts below give information about travel and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and makes comparisons where relevant.
The line graph portrays the number of visitors to and from the UK, while the bar chart illustrates the most popular countries by UK residents 1999.
According to the line graph, the disparity between these two groups was keep expanding over the 20 years span. Specifically, only around 12 million visitors had been chosen visiting abroad by 1979. The number was rising marginally to 20 million until 1986. Then, the visitor’s number jumped to approximately 53 million at the end of 1999. While the increasing speed of visitors travel to the UK was much slower during the 2 decades, from 20 million to 27 million.
As shown in the bar chart, there were five countries relatively popular to UK residents in 1999. France was the most attractive country where attracted 11 million UK visitors. At the meantime, Spain had been chosen by 9 million UK residents. The figure of other three nations- USA, Greece and Turkey were close, served 4 million, 3.5 million and 3 million tourists respectively around this year.
Overall, even though the number of visitors from abroad expanded almost 3 times over the two decades span, the gap between enter and leave the country was enlarged gradually. One third UK visitors chose France and Spain as their destinations.