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What should a government do for a country to become successful?
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What should a government do for a country to become successful?


        We all knew that the government guide its country to success. It is a tough task for the government to up lift the country from poverty, lessen employment rate and boost its economy. Some people believe not only the government,but also the people must take an action in order their country become successful. In this essay, it will tackles about what actions or ways should the government and its people in order their country become successful.

       The  Government has the power to implement their policy and laws. They should not use its authoritative power to do some illegal act and corruption. If the corruption is rampant, it might lead to economic recession. So the Government must be strict and have a transparency towards the people about government expenses and its projects. In this way, people will have the information about where their taxes heading for.Example of it, a government project to build a bridge, they should declare the exact expenses, lenght of time and the name of contractors.

       In addition of that, Government must give priority to education and health care system. A government with good education system has a higher employment rate which multibillion corpation company preferred students with degrees. More over, having a good health system, like giving information to the public about proper diet,execrise and information to avoide acquiring certain diseases, has a benefit to the government in which it lessen the financial cost in spending the medicine of a hospitalize patient.

      Furthermore, people also have a role to do in countrys progression.People must go to school and study hard in order to land on a better job. If the people are productive, a successful country will be the outcome.

     In conclusion, government must be strong to govern the people to success. Eventhough the government strive hard to lead the country, if its own people are not cooperative and not productive, the hardwork of the govenrment will be useless.Therefore, people also play a vital role of country's succession.People must work hard for themselves, for their family, society and to their own country to achieve a better or successful country.


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