Hi Ramesh

This essay is nice and simple and clear. I really like the clear easy-to-read style. Well done!

The layout is clear and the ideas are developed. Ninety percent of your errors now are in one area only -  articles and plurals. You need to sit down and just work out 'the' and plurals. Plurals are often used in English -  they seem to be simpler and to avoid the need for articles. They also avoid the need for he and she.

Some words, of course, don't have plurals - infrastructure, information, research. Don't add 's'!

So have a look at the articles/plurals below and see if you can work on them. Otherwise, great work and well done!

Word Choice/Word Form/Usage

• large numbers of accidents occur because of the unavailability of proper infrastructures.→ large numbers of accidents occur because of the lack of proper infrastructure.  

• At last → Finally

Shorten/Simplify

Try to eliminate words which do not contribute much to your sentences. You wrote:

Most of the roads on which the vehicles ride every day are not suitable for driving which also increases the chance of accidents. (23 words)

Here’s one possible rewrite with fewer words but more specific examples:

Many roads are unsafe due to overcrowding, poor construction or maintenance, increasing the chance of accidents. (16 words)

Articles/Plurals

• some people breach the traffic rule → some people breach traffic rules
• making the punishment strict will increase the road safety.  → making punishments stricter will increase road safety.
• The accidents on road and the road safety  → Road accidents and road safety are
• the absence of overhead bridge  → the absence of overhead bridges
• who are working as driver of public vehicles → who are working as drivers of public vehicles   OR who are working as bus or taxi drivers
• Their irresponsible and uncontrolled driving habit creates the risk for other person on the road. → Their irresponsible and uncontrolled driving habits creates risks for other persons on the road.   OR Their irrresponsible and uncontrolled driving endangers other road users.
• the unavailability of proper infrastructures. → the unavailability of proper infrastructure.  (Infrastructure, like ‘equipment’ or ‘research’ or ‘information,’ is non-count)
• If necessary infrastructures are built → If the necessary infrastructure is built
• So, proper awareness can increase the road safety by certain level. → So, proper awareness can increase road safety by a certain level.
• Increasing number of vehicles also increase the number of accidents → Increasing the number of vehicles also increases the number of accidents   OR    An increase in the number of vehicles also means an increase in the number of accidents
• it works for only short term → it works only for the short term.
• promotion of public vehicle are necessary  → promotion of public transport is necessary

Hi Ramesh

It should be easy to fix - it just means finding the right chapter in a regular grammar book. It's a problem from first language interference and from a personal style that emphasises content and short, telegraphic communication. It can come across in speaking as being too blunt, so you should check that you add articles in speaking as well.

Have a look at this Google search for articles quiz online. You will probably find a lot of them too easy, but aim for 100% accuracy. Look for intermediate, difficult or advanced quizzes like this one: http://a4esl.org/q/h/9901/cw-articles.html

Good luck! It's an easy problem to fix. Remember, words are free -  you don't have to pay, so don't leave any out!