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Comment on Comments by Mr Writefix

Mr Writefix — Tue, 29 Aug 2023 16:21:12 +0000

In reply to Jonnie.

Hi Jonnie
Yes, you are correct – it’s generally better to avoid any new ideas in the conclusion. However, you can add a suggestion for the reader directly related to your opinion in the essay, express a hope for the future or summarize the essay. Keep it short and snappy, though!

Regards

Comment on Comments by Jonnie

Jonnie — Tue, 04 Jul 2023 05:06:17 +0000

I’m a little concerned about your advice on the “Writing about Graphs” page to save one trend for the conclusion. I’ve been teaching writing for more than 20 years and was an IELTS examiner for 10. If I had seen a second idea introduced in the conclusion, I would have marked it wrong. The conclusion should not have any information that was not mentioned in the body of the paper.

Comment on Comments by Bimal Arora

Bimal Arora — Wed, 12 Oct 2022 06:44:16 +0000

Great piece of content.
Do you provide one-one IELTS coaching?

Comment on clockster_small by Abdulrhman ali

Abdulrhman ali — Tue, 10 Dec 2019 19:51:04 +0000

the differences between Riyadh and small village

Comment on Essay topics and tags by Moreblessing

Moreblessing — Thu, 19 Oct 2017 16:36:52 +0000

Engineered projects the impact in a economy

Comment on Protecting the Environment by hiruka

hiruka — Sun, 15 Jan 2017 11:08:04 +0000

thank you

Comment on Comments by Enda Tuomey

Enda Tuomey — Fri, 25 Nov 2016 09:15:43 +0000

In reply to Amit Kachroo. Thank you very much! Very kind of you! Wishing you the very best with your PhD studies.

Comment on Is ambition positive or negative? by rejoice john

rejoice john — Mon, 14 Nov 2016 18:55:06 +0000

how does culture destroy our ambition in the society

Comment on Comments by Amit Kachroo

Amit Kachroo — Tue, 08 Nov 2016 17:21:48 +0000

Dear Writefix ,

What an amazing website you have. 3 years back i gave my first IELTS and scored 7.5. Now, i gave it again for my phd admissions and scored 8. Every time, i looked up writefix for the prep and was satisfied as ever before. You guys are super cool.

Once again, thanks a zillion 🙂

Regards//
Amit

Comment on Are we becoming more independent? by fatima

fatima — Thu, 03 Nov 2016 06:55:46 +0000

excellent essay… could you please give a feedback on my version of this topic?I have my ielts in two weeks and really worried as to how I’l perform.Rate my essay with band score.

Nowadays,more and more people are living independently due to urbanisation and globalisation. I agree that in the recent times the human is less dependent on one another in comparison to that in the past. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons supporting my point of view.
In the olden days, maximum of the population lived in the rural areas in the cultivation of farms and the entire familys’ money accounted to the fulfilment of the basic necessities . In addition to this, they had to travel long distances in order to purchase goods. Furtheremore, in case of droughts,they had to depend on the provision of loans from landlords for their survival.
In the present time,every individual is striving to achieve education and move to urban areas for jobs. The infrastructure and the amenities have undoubtedly made urban life comfortable and the choice of each one of us. Cities have all the facilities like supermarkets,malls,parks in its vicinity thereby the life is at ease.However, a single person earns enough to support his family financially, hence being self-sufficient and not relying on others. Moreover bank loans have become so popular that every household is involved in it. These loans cater the needs of people starting from vehicle loan to house loans.One can attain all the luxury of living by paying small installments.
To conclude, people are no more interdependent in contrast to the past. This change is for the betterment of society and the development of human race.