Due to the development of modern, technology traditional (tradition technology) skills and ways of life have disappeared which is the result of switching on old means with new. (I think the sentence after which is meaningless) Some people say that we should keep traditional skills alive as it contains history of our past. Though other people think, keeping them (keep what?) alive as profession is not possible (impossible) but as a game, and skills can be kept alive.

It is very important to keep traditional skills and ways of life alive because progressive prospects of today's technological development is based on our history of past. (The sentence is a bit long, delete because) If we preserve traditional skills, we will give a chance to ourselves to transfer that information to next generation as they will not be known about prime source of technological development they are using (use).

Again the sentence is too long, I rarely have interest to read the essay below. Try to cut it down.

However, this is the fast growing technological era, where (era is time, you cannot use where here, replace it to when) most of previous ways of doing things have changed. Nowadays it sounds very unusual to use horses, and oxen, for ploughing purpose. Besides that people do not use old means of transportation such as horses and camels, though (you are not change the idea here) technology has brought faster and reliable means of transportation like cars and planes.

In addition, people now mostly use e-mail to send important files, documents and letters to other people around the world. Whereas the usage of sending letters through post has sharply decreased as it is the time consuming process and insecure as well.

After all, transnational skills can be kept alive such as nowadays horses use in different games which can remind us the way horses contributed mean of to traveling and ploughing. So we can represent our skills in different forms to preserve them.

To sum up, it is a reality that ways of doing things have been completely switched on by new advanced technology only because of its perfection. However we still need to remind ourselves how we have achieved achieve this place,; therefore, there should be representation of traditional skill and ways of life in order to make us aware about the history of our past.

Hey dude, I read ur essay, its fine.

1. Write an thesis sentence

2, Pay attention to the puntuation

3. Some tiny grammar mistakes

4. Long sentences

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David

Don't rush paste here. I guess we should give chances to others, that's the way we improve mutually.

I hope u good luck. I ll take at that time too.